Calm down, pregnancy takes a while, your belly will grow after 4 months. It will take a while for it to show other signs of nausea. The question is whether Dan will lose his wife and she'll become a slut or not. It's a shame that the authors with this plot in their stories are all standing still.
I try to look on the brighter side and hope Don could right the ship, but you are correct Snafu. Don‘s early chapters of Toxic Attraction generated a lot of buzz online which drew my attention to his stories and this forum. He gained my respect for someone who could generate story after story continuously each month, especially compared to other authors who would start a series and then disappear. It would be crazy to think any author would relinquish control of their story to the highest bidder. Why sacrifice your integrity and reputation when all it takes is creating quality content. If the content is good people will come back and buy more. All this to vent, but I am too invested to walk away from Toxic Attraction. I will see this train wreck to the bitter end, but my excitement level has definitely waned after reading this chapter.
That could explain how Don ”meets” his monthly deadlines. What do you think of Don’s other long form stories? Neighborhood Encounter? Tainted Conception? I’m waiting for Don to write more chapters on each so I can binge read and become invested in the characters. For a short story, I did enjoy Don’s Detestable Liaisons which had similar vibes to Toxic Attraction just condensed. Hopefully the story comes to a conclusion soon so will not evolve into Toxic Attraction lite.
Not sure there are any. Antarctica is close but not quite as good. Avid has started writing again and it's pretty terrible. And someone restarted Neighbor Chronicles as a 'redux' but it's only alright.
I agree with you SmartMan. What made Toxic Attraction unique was the plot was different from any other hot wives story. She was not a slut banging every guy in the world while cuckold her husband. There is some believability a loyal wife like Sarah would slowly be corrupted and manipulated by someone beneath her. That is what attracted me to the story at first. That’s why we can’t have nice things. Don wants to cater to his paying fans, but abandon what made him unique and popular in the first place. I liked I wish there was an alternative story, but you are correct some stories recommended are not appealing or the authors stopped writing chapters for a long period of time people forgot about them.
Same, I was excited for Tainted Conception originally as I thought it was going to be a quick burn. I could've sworn he said on Patreon it would be five chapters but I may just be misremembering. Either way I agree it's become the same repetitive formula as TA with no escalation or end in sight. NE I didn't even bother reading after a chapter or two as it seemed to be the same old strokes while also having the strange element of 'country boy cucks city folks' which really does nothing for me.
Yeah the whole redneck and city folk angle turned me off real quick in NE and purposely slowing the tempo of the storyline. I found another forum’s thread on TA and most spout the same rhetoric as you described in Don’s Discord SmartMan. They find the story more to their liking since Sarah turned into a slut and now want her to screw everyone: Bryon, Richard, Jessie, the whole D&D group, and the homeless man. Seems like this forum is the only sane bunch who wanted to enjoy an unique cheating wife story based somewhat in reality not some fantasy, off-the-wall caricature Sarah is becoming. I can find those types of slut stories on a whole host of other platforms, but none of those sluts have kids in the story which makes the direction even more weird.
Nope, it is the same, with the same issues I mentioned earlier and I accepted Chiily's wise words of waiting until this version came out, because Don is known for big changes or additions in the final but I see none. My review of thise chapter remains, 1 Meh down.
I agree with you, Chillie_Willie and Smartman. It is odd that someone as educated, family oriented and has professed a deep love her husband, now goes full whore/slut. Like you guys, I'm becoming more disinterested in TA. I only stay in cause ya just gotta know having read this far.
